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Wednesday, June 8, 2011

Ethan's Writing

Starfish
Starfish floating starfish sinking
Starfish rising at the seashore
Starfish orange starfish yellow
Starfish that colour starfish this colour.
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7 comments:

  1. CodyJune 8, 2011 at 5:55 PM

    Your writing is very original. I liked your poem.

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  2. ZacJune 8, 2011 at 11:50 PM

    I like your poem Ethan. It reminds me of being at the beach searching in rock pools for starfish. Zac.B.

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  3. emileeJune 9, 2011 at 12:30 AM

    hi room 17 ethan's writing is great. ethan you are good with spelling, keep up the good work.

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  4. MasonJune 9, 2011 at 1:19 AM

    I like your poem. It is amazing.

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  5. AnonymousJune 9, 2011 at 9:21 AM

    wow thats so cool Ethan, keep up the good work and you look so handsome...churr bo' from Aunty Nicky

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  6. brandonJune 9, 2011 at 10:17 PM

    WOW! Ethan I love your poem.

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  7. brandonJune 9, 2011 at 10:29 PM

    That is a wonderful poem . I could read it all night. And keep on doing great poem's!

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